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miyuli, July 28th, 2010, 4:05 am ( Reply )

- Poor lil Haru is about to give up... So it's time for someone else to act x3

Ah, yesterday, someone told me the quality of FS has been declining recently... I guess I need to put more effort in it >_< (Like playing more with the perspective as I started doing again here~) I also need to pay more attention to the anatomy....

I'm good with criticism so whenever you see me slacking off you're welcome to slap me ;__;

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Awwwww ( Reply )

KYAAAAAAA, this is so great D':
COME ON GUYS!!!! *freaks out*

posted by AlexYoshida on July 28th, 2010, 4:13 am





 
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What did they say was slacking, I honestly haven't noticed a change! I think it looks as good as the day you started, very prof and nicely, not to metion neatly toned. Maybe theys jelous or something lol, I think it looks fine.

posted by Amaya-kitty on July 28th, 2010, 4:20 am



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Waaah~ can't wait for it to continue!
Maybe you were getting a lil bit lazy but even though it still looks really profesional.
Did you ever sit down and seriously learn about perspective and anatomy for the sake of improving? Or did your talent just walk buy and jump on you? (hope you will agree to the first xD')
I love your drawing and hope that you will continue to draw bl storys cause it obviously suits you!

posted by akichama on July 28th, 2010, 4:29 am





 
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I think you've been doing an amazing job.

And Haru's adorable X3

posted by Kellysterhabit on July 28th, 2010, 4:53 am





 
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Every. Part. Of. This. Page. Is. FILLED. With. EPICNESS.

(Because there is chibi and awesome close up-ness...)

posted by Onyx-Rose on July 28th, 2010, 4:54 am





 
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I saw no decline...
But practice is always good.
I think ya did a good job, hun :)

posted by paint_tin on July 28th, 2010, 5:01 am





 
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URG.

I want Haru to lose... what's that secret? xD

posted by Loyale on July 28th, 2010, 5:08 am





 
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I like the play with perspective here, the first panel looks very nice. Also, I do see a difference in that page and the last few pages. I don't know what it is, but effort definitely shows. Keep it up! I think you have a lot of potential still waiting to be discovered :3

posted by _Sam_ on July 28th, 2010, 5:37 am





 
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awww~ shiratori looking back looks sooo cute!

posted by sbdrag on July 28th, 2010, 5:48 am





 
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everyone will know that secretly im really a girl... nuuuuuu!

posted by Themarkees on July 28th, 2010, 6:14 am



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Do I want to know his secret??? Yes!
Do I want him to win???? Yes!
So I think your art is as good as always??? YES!!!!!!!!!!

posted by Death-Destination on July 28th, 2010, 6:40 am





 
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Like..!! GAH!!:D Shiratori turned around!! yay!!!:D

posted by Raichi on July 28th, 2010, 7:10 am





 
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Awww, Shiratori looks so damn cute in the last panel <333

posted by b4k4chan on July 28th, 2010, 7:17 am





 
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i don't think you declined~ you still are good as tyou was on the beginning! your style is very unique, don't be tricked by people that doesn't understand how it is to do a comic <3

posted by JunYo on July 28th, 2010, 7:29 am





 
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d'aww

posted by SafireCharmz on July 28th, 2010, 8:18 am





 
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I think Haru will lose, but when his friend will be about to say everyone his secret, then Shiratori will understand whole situation and he'll admit his crush in the last moment to "rescue" Haru.
that was my little prediction XD anyway, great art. I love perspective <3

posted by IgaCherry on July 28th, 2010, 8:41 am



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Dang it Shiratori!!!!! Your so cruel!!!

posted by Naomi (Guest) on July 28th, 2010, 9:13 am





 
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I didn't notice any decline.:D I love everything so far! Update soon! Suspense!

posted by Little-EpicX on July 28th, 2010, 9:20 am





 
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I must Emigrate to another country!!!
...wow Haru, is that all you can think of?
I love this comic!

posted by cowlover2 on July 28th, 2010, 9:43 am





 
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Yes Haru, emigrate! Then Shiratori can follow and you can raise alpacas and man babies together there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

posted by Kuro-Neko-Chan on July 28th, 2010, 9:58 am





 
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Awww, his face is so ":C"
and I like the perspective :D

posted by SomethingisAmisss on July 28th, 2010, 10:12 am





 
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As I read the last few pages over, I was listening to the song Stars by Helen Jane Long. It made everything all extra sad. :/ Especially the whole Shiratori thing...with him looking back, as if to so something. The JERK :<

posted by sieablu on July 28th, 2010, 10:21 am



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Not trying to be nitpicking, but you used the wrong form of immigrate.
Love this comic

posted by Guest on July 28th, 2010, 11:06 am





 
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Aww don't do that Haru! But look Shiratori turned around, he's obviously looking at him ;) eh eh?

posted by Natashakiable18 on July 28th, 2010, 11:14 am





 
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Ouch! poor Haru ; A ;

But Shiratori's expression >w< fufufufufu~ X3

posted by Ioana-Yuki on July 28th, 2010, 11:33 am





 
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Awwies QAQ;

posted by Blackyuni on July 28th, 2010, 11:46 am





 
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O___O
he turned...
I sense something comingg~
(of course)

posted by M-24 on July 28th, 2010, 11:47 am





 
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please please please please update again today!!! I can't wait till tomorrow!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your comic and I don't even care if the art is a little sloppy! In that sloppy art you can see so much potential and so much care and love...so it doesn't matter if it's a little sloppy. I love it i love it i love it!!!

posted by firefox516 on July 28th, 2010, 11:47 am





 
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Who ever told you that, doesnt know how to appreciate the good work that you do. xP

I think your art and style is wonderful and perfect, but if you want to improve what is already good enough, then thats pretty much your choice. :)

but anyways.. LOVE YOUR WORK! xD Its soo COOL! Keep it up! :D

posted by Drea.M on July 28th, 2010, 11:59 am





 
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Immigration XD Lovely plan Haru. That'll definitely work XD

posted by shadowsonicstar on July 28th, 2010, 12:23 pm





 
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Just draw the way you feel more comfortable and confident :3~ I think you're working with a good quality for a webcomic~ your style and skills are really good, so don't worry about anything else xD~ If I were to say something about your pages, it'd be that I wished there were more panels so we could see more things happening in a page :'D but that's me being selfish~ hoho because I can't get enough of your story! please keep it up!!

posted by Heldrad on July 28th, 2010, 12:26 pm





 
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Psh, tell whoever told you that to go die in a pit. Your artwork is amazing. Just do what you feel comfortable with. :3

Your comic is amazing and makes me smile every time you update. <3 Chibi Haru is adorable~

posted by Aizu on July 28th, 2010, 12:42 pm



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Woooooah. The first panel's perspective is boootiful. I said that before I read what you posted, and now that I have read it, I must say that is looks great. 8DD It's a perfect 'defeated' pose. <3

posted by Nosecks on July 28th, 2010, 12:58 pm





 
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LOL When all goes wrong, go to another Country. LOL

posted by Co-Co on July 28th, 2010, 1:15 pm



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hhehe dont leave the country. You can win him

posted by Shinpacha on July 28th, 2010, 1:37 pm





 
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I don't really want Haru to lose, but, heck, I wanna know the secret Dx
Shiratori turned around!!! :O

posted by AmoriiBlossom on July 28th, 2010, 1:37 pm





 
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that was one epic turn backish move shira-chan! you can do it haru. u_u

posted by xrainbowmochi on July 28th, 2010, 2:32 pm



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This is awesome. x3 When does this comic get updated? (Yuss, I fail! XD)

posted by Chloe (Guest) on July 28th, 2010, 3:06 pm





 
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The new perspective looks -amazing- :D
Also, I <3 Shiratori's face in the last panel. He looks cute :3

posted by SpazzChicken on July 28th, 2010, 3:26 pm



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I think your art looks way better now then it did in the beggining.

The only thing I would like to point out is that this is the third time in chapter 5 that the bottom panel is Shiratori turning around .__.' The first two times were ok though.

I only have praises besides that. Good perspective in Haru! =) AWESOME storyline! >_<

posted by Mira_Amary on July 28th, 2010, 3:29 pm





 
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I think the art has a great quality already, but then again, if you wish to improve no one will complain

posted by CheshireCat on July 28th, 2010, 4:25 pm





 
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I'm horribly curious about what that secret is about.

posted by DecodedError on July 28th, 2010, 4:28 pm





 
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I don't think it's been lacking at all! :D
I haven't noticed any kind of change, don't push yourself too hard~
But of course, improvement is healthy too^-^

*CAN NOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT*

posted by ElectricPizza on July 28th, 2010, 4:36 pm





 
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Hm, that's odd. I think the quality has improved if anything. I don't mean that as a placating type comment. I'm very honest with artists who seem to be slipping. Whoever it was who said that you must have been very nitpicky or very spiteful. Cause I can't see it.

There are a few places where the lines aren't as clean as they used to be, and the sparkles seemed a little different, but it wasn't something that I would have really taken into account. Keep up the good work!

posted by otakulys on July 28th, 2010, 4:41 pm



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arghhh why can't he just admit he likes him and ignore the bet? LOL ... XD *yells at inanimate characters* ADMIT IT ALREADY! lol JK don't worry, lol I love this comic ^^

posted by Kikai on July 28th, 2010, 5:14 pm





 
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The magical cheshire kitty says that Haru shall lose. HE HAS NOT BEEN WRONG YET!!! ... Nor has he been right either, I'm just seeing how good he is at telling the future like that octopus. BUT ENOUGH OF THAT MATTER! My womanly curiosity is telling me I want to know what his secret is... @w@

posted by yerkhater on July 28th, 2010, 7:29 pm





 
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I love the perspective pose! <3 Those are really hard to do!

posted by GoldenGossamer on July 28th, 2010, 7:48 pm





 
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... Immigrate.

posted by Salome on July 28th, 2010, 9:02 pm





 
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OMG OMG!!! Dies from suspence

posted by FoxDemonHikaru on July 28th, 2010, 9:03 pm





 
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I wonder if he finds out about the bet like in all other "bet-type" of plot-lines =o. Then we might need another chapter~~
But look! Shiratori looks unsure~~ -giggles-

posted by Kate09190 on July 28th, 2010, 9:33 pm





 
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Haru...I think that's a wee bit drastic... XD

posted by Faery Goddyss on July 28th, 2010, 11:50 pm





 
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xD immigrate?
ha

posted by Ai Ataru on July 30th, 2010, 3:06 pm





 
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Immigrate xD , Haru you're such a drama queen >.>

posted by sunako-sama on July 30th, 2010, 7:20 pm





 
Bah I haven't been watchiong new pages! ( Reply )

This page. Is just so. Epic. Yes, that is the word. It kinda pulls on the heart strings, that last face QwQ

posted by redleaveshavefallen on August 11th, 2010, 1:05 pm





 
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i wanna know his secret. >.<

posted by rhea. on September 10th, 2010, 1:13 pm





 
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so what is the secret ;;)););)

posted by catharsis.jpg on July 13th, 2016, 9:14 pm



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HE LOOKED BACK!!!!!!!

posted by claryd (Guest) on September 17th, 2016, 9:56 pm



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