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miyuli, June 15th, 2010, 3:54 pm ( Reply )

- Sorry, it has been ages since my last update... again v_v And there people were hoping for some action... Hope you don't hate me now XD
I've had some 'issues' concerning my art... I feel like something is missing or not right... But I don't want to bore you with this. I'll eventually figure it out myself I guess...
However, this page was a lot of fun to draw. As promised I tried to pay more attention to the background. I have to say, drawing backgrounds is actually fun! I just don't like constructing things like perspective... Thus the bg on this page is pretty estimated... Hope it doesn't look too weird...

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oh deary. So drunk he remembers nothing. How potentially naughty. >D

posted by Fhero on June 15th, 2010, 3:57 pm





 
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Awww. ; u;
That morning hair makes him look awfully familiar.

posted by Hershey-Morning on June 15th, 2010, 3:59 pm





 
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no no no. there is absolutely nothing wrong with your art...at all. its delicious... but i can see where your coming from since the worst critic is oneself...( u can see your own mistakes... but WE cant :) ) love love love this comic! glad it updated!

posted by appelight on June 15th, 2010, 4:00 pm



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Rofl, his morning hair makes him loook adorable. -w-

posted by Hime-Chan on June 15th, 2010, 4:04 pm





 
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My favorite word for morning hair is bedhead. It rhymes. X3

And oh no! Drunken memory loss! What is poor Haru going to think?

posted by coolchan on June 15th, 2010, 4:06 pm





 
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hohoho ^__^

posted by SafireCharmz on June 15th, 2010, 4:17 pm





 
"FINISH HARU'S SENTENCE" GAME ( Reply )

"That means ... That must mean he ... raped me!"

Can't wait for the next page. xD

Also, good luck with the art situation. >__> -been there, done that-

posted by SamayoSukuichi on June 15th, 2010, 4:20 pm





 
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Let's just hope he doesn't make assumptions and embarrass himself.

I have a feeling that's going to happen...


edit: If you really wanted to up your pages to a more professional standard I'd recommend cleaning them up a bit, although I'm partial to sketchy drawings myself. If you sharpened the lines and solidified them a bit and perhaps found a wider variety of patterns and tones to experiment with the pages would have a much more... 'complete' feel to them.

You could also try experimenting with more black. High contrast makes for good emotional portrayal in comics.

posted by r-o-t-a on June 15th, 2010, 4:44 pm





 
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LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL @ SamayoSukuichi!

posted by black sesame on June 15th, 2010, 4:51 pm





 
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I don't hate you! And I don't mind the late update at all, I was actually worried that you were sick or something orz <3 I'm glad you're not

posted by Emily and the Oracle on June 15th, 2010, 5:12 pm





 
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He's so cute. "That means. I TOTALLY GOT LAID LAST NIGHT" Awww, that poor thing, little does he know that nothing happened at all... he's still got a long way to go.

And your backgrounds are good enough for me. I'm not going to be picky, its just a webcomic. And since I love your story and your art I say it's fine as it is.

Don't feel down! I'm rooting for you!

posted by Misuzuki on June 15th, 2010, 5:15 pm





 
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Aaaaah A fresh new page! That made my whole day :D

posted by Blackyuni on June 15th, 2010, 5:30 pm



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You're wonderful for updating:)

My guess is that he'll think he reached his goal and won the bet just because he slept at Shiratori's:P

posted by zosiacchi on June 15th, 2010, 5:41 pm





 
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"omgah, DID I DO IT WITH HIM?! SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCESSSS!" ;D

posted by raaawrkttyXD on June 15th, 2010, 6:04 pm



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"I GOT LAID?"

posted by HolyChibi on June 15th, 2010, 6:27 pm



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Rape ._.
One word is rape.
Next Page Please :D

posted by Britty on June 15th, 2010, 7:12 pm





 
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Maybe it's missing ink?

I really love your art style. ;A; And your toning abilities. I wouldn't mind if they stayed the way they are now! You could even get them published like this.

posted by Darrelkun on June 15th, 2010, 8:05 pm





 
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lol xD
i bet he thinks he was taken away and raped.
<33

posted by Ai Ataru on June 15th, 2010, 8:35 pm





 
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N'awwwww this page is just sooooo cute!

posted by Onyx-Rose on June 15th, 2010, 9:25 pm





 
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He's still so cute >w< even with his morning hair ;) hahaha!

In Haru's mind "I had Sex with Shiratori" ;) xDDD

posted by Natashakiable18 on June 15th, 2010, 9:48 pm





 
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"That means..."
...we had SEX?! XDD i'm sure of that u-รน
anyway with bg looks good :D

posted by JunYo on June 15th, 2010, 9:53 pm





 
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hahah adorable! xD Love the way the 3rd panel looks! ^u^ good job on the backgrounds! Isn't it fun??

posted by Heldrad on June 15th, 2010, 10:40 pm





 
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love the last panel <3

posted by In England on June 15th, 2010, 10:40 pm



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This story both excites me and amuses me. XD Your pages and characters are gorgeous (they actually remind me of a manhwa called 'the breaker') :3

And try not to worry yourself too much. Having 'issues' with ones own art comes with the territory. All artists have it and it just means that you are trying to improve your own techniques. Don't force it, just keep doing what your doing and eventually what you're 'missing' will mold into your artwork (notice if you read manga or watch animated shows, characters gradually change in appearance throughout the series).

posted by Shadow (Guest) on June 16th, 2010, 2:12 am





 
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oh it's all coming back XD

posted by Gopeach on June 16th, 2010, 2:23 am



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OMG! bed-hair! SUPER DUPER CUTE (:
I like the different persepectives! Keep up the fantastic work!!

posted by celery (Guest) on June 16th, 2010, 2:31 am





 
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I really like the art on this page! The bg is really cool. =D Definitely catches the eye.

posted by Dalcora on June 16th, 2010, 2:32 am





 
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I think your bg's look fine, the perspective it good. Awww Haru's bed hair is so cute and like mine ;]

posted by LullabyMeth on June 16th, 2010, 4:10 am





 
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poor baby ..

posted by Blueberries on June 16th, 2010, 8:10 am





 
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Awhhh - no action.
BUT! His morning hair is spikey~

posted by Kate09190 on June 16th, 2010, 4:33 pm





 
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D'awww I like his hair like that xD
well, non-bed-head is good too!

posted by Beyond Massacre on June 16th, 2010, 6:40 pm





 
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he wait to think until he gets his morning coffee...or juice

posted by AJAngelique on June 16th, 2010, 7:15 pm





 
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he looks smaller than usual, its very cute

posted by Weirdonetwo. on June 16th, 2010, 7:57 pm





 
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I <3 that middle panel. Haru is an adorable bed head :D

posted by SpazzChicken on June 16th, 2010, 9:16 pm



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"I...And Him....D8 HOLY-"
XD Aww, bedhead. :)

posted by FanFantasy on June 17th, 2010, 12:55 am



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what did he do in the middle of the night?? ~<3

posted by yeahreally on June 17th, 2010, 2:09 pm



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this page have somethin which make better than the others. I don't say that the others are bad or something xD really I like all, but in the lasts ones I see you become better ^^

I think the BG, for more little this has, make the pages a lot diferents =P. The BGs are complicateds, but if you never try never can learn about its xD I like to see you want to try adding some things in the backgrounds.

Aww and Haru is so much cute whit these hair xD

posted by Megu (Guest) on June 17th, 2010, 2:29 pm



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be ahppy! you'll find out whats wrong soon! Just go with the flow~ lol Well im glad you updated! ^^ It makes me a very happy commenter/watcher/whatever!

posted by ibiri on June 17th, 2010, 5:30 pm





 
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>:D
Damnit you need to hurry with the updates! D:
I re-read all of it 2 times V-v
<3

posted by demonickyoshiro on June 17th, 2010, 8:36 pm



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Will the next page be a big display of his imagination of him and Shiratori having passionate sex?

posted by Crewger on June 18th, 2010, 3:30 am





 
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That coach looks comfy.. ^^

posted by Botan on January 9th, 2011, 8:10 pm



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Im never this cute when Im drunk dammit...

posted by gentlechaos on February 13th, 2013, 6:42 pm



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