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miyuli, June 3rd, 2010, 11:57 am ( Reply )

- Sorry for not uploading for ages...
I'm in some sort of artist's block... It feels like something is missing in my drawings so I tried to draw and draw to figure it out... I also tried to make this page more 'dynamic' and interesting but it ended up looking weird... Ah well... I keep practicing!!

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I love drunk Haru. ^^ He's so adorable!


posted by luhlikun on June 3rd, 2010, 12:01 pm

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I agree with luhlikun. Haru's so cute when he's drunk. xD

posted by Axlish on June 3rd, 2010, 12:02 pm

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i think you did just fine!!! maybe its a little empty b/g-wise, but my b/g's are always empty. XD

*gives haru cake*

posted by cupEcake on June 3rd, 2010, 12:09 pm

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I went all crazy when I saw teh update!! XD

And I don't think it looks weird :'D It looks awesome X3.....

Bah, I just ate cake!! xD rofl *gives to Haru* *3*

posted by Blackyuni on June 3rd, 2010, 12:09 pm

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This is amazing. Haru is adorable. I want to glomp him!!! Don't worry your art is amazing!!!

posted by Screaming_Teacup on June 3rd, 2010, 12:10 pm

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And again I can't wait to see the next page even though this one was just uploaded! :<
I'm insatiable... u__u

Will Shuu-chan be able to talk Shiratori into taking Haru with him? :>
What will happen at home? :D
I hope naughty things. At least a bit. :O

Your perspective changes and tryouts are really interesting and you're very skilled so don't give up! You're doing a great job! :D


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posted by dragonfly92 (Guest) on June 3rd, 2010, 12:11 pm

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Drunken Haru is even more adorable than sober Haru. I didn't think that was possible!

posted by Maggerz on June 3rd, 2010, 12:17 pm

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GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! LOVE is what this is called! Love dammit!!!! I think he should be like 'fine...mumble grumble' and take him...but when he falls asleep...questioning him like 'why me? why did you chose me?' and then he should kiss him and freak out and run off to do homework or something XD*drools*

posted by firefox516 on June 3rd, 2010, 12:25 pm

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Aw drunk Haru is super cute x3 haha! He's like a little kid <333

posted by Natashakiable18 on June 3rd, 2010, 12:27 pm

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I wanna kidnap drunk Haru, he's soooo adorable!!! :D ... ooo, I wonder what's gonna happen at dudes house :D

posted by ZivXanthus on June 3rd, 2010, 12:27 pm

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Yeeeesss Shiratori, take him home with you. xD

Can I adopt a drunk Haru? xD;

posted by Akunen on June 3rd, 2010, 12:47 pm

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LOL, there's no difference between a normal and drunken Haru, they both need cake with ShiratoriXDD

NOO, please, please, I beg you, don't think too much about the way you draw because you'll end up feeling stressful each time you want to draw and not able to start anything just like me. And yesss, it makes me a big time loser.

posted by zosiacchi on June 3rd, 2010, 12:50 pm

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That yawn is the most adorable thing ever.

posted by SaintRazzle on June 3rd, 2010, 12:59 pm


I love tihs page "Shu-chann I want cake" that is just adorable.

posted by LittleK-chan on June 3rd, 2010, 1:17 pm

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D'awwwwwwww drunk Haru! <3

posted by Lixxie-B on June 3rd, 2010, 1:17 pm

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i'm soo in love with shiratori's face in the first panel XD

mm...i see a lot coming X3

posted by Blueberries on June 3rd, 2010, 1:25 pm

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Haru is so adorable!~

posted by Mikaru-chan on June 3rd, 2010, 1:30 pm

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Usual grammar nerd note from Toki! *raises hand*
Most of the time, when you're saying you're classmates with someone, you'd say "We're in the same class." Class, referring to the group of people, rather than the actual classroom.

But other than that, I like drunken Haru. He's cute. XD

posted by coolchan on June 3rd, 2010, 2:12 pm

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Sooo cute!!!

posted by Alexychan on June 3rd, 2010, 2:16 pm

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drunk haru is sooo cute =w= anyway keep up posting, doing comics helps people to improve so don't stop just because you feel like something is going wrong... you'll improve little by little drawing everyday, it's not so easy to find what's missing of a style you know? <3

posted by JunYo on June 3rd, 2010, 2:28 pm

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And I've just been DYING for this update. C:

posted by Kurosaki556 on June 3rd, 2010, 2:40 pm

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YAY drunken slumber party! woooooooo

posted by TwilightRain888 on June 3rd, 2010, 2:43 pm

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I think the page looks good! The last panel is my favourite.

Sleepy Haru is sleeeepy~

posted by Anonymouth on June 3rd, 2010, 3:04 pm

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>O<! Sleepy-chibi-Haru-chan is sooooooooooooooo cute~! >w< Can I has one?

posted by ImaginaryPerson on June 3rd, 2010, 3:33 pm

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omg, Haru looks sooo cutee xD
n I think this page looks really good >w<

posted by Y.Arguilanva on June 3rd, 2010, 3:38 pm

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Sorry, Haru. The cake is a lie.

posted by Guest on June 3rd, 2010, 5:27 pm

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Guu, I know just what you mean when you feel something's missing! D:
I'm not much of a drawer, but when I write, I WRITE FAST AND DON'T STOP.
Eventually it all slows down, and...it just crashes. Dx;;

posted by FloatingMist (Guest) on June 3rd, 2010, 5:32 pm

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lol...Haru looks so uke xD

posted by Maiumaora on June 3rd, 2010, 5:59 pm

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Staying over at Shiratori's house??



posted by yukaiHUNNY on June 3rd, 2010, 6:00 pm

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I love this page. Great facial expressions and over all just lovely. Keep up the good work!!

posted by _kokoa_ on June 3rd, 2010, 7:33 pm

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Drunk Haru IS CUTE AS HELL. x3

posted by GoldenGossamer on June 3rd, 2010, 7:33 pm

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I love Haru, Hee-Hee <3

posted by Hershey-Morning on June 3rd, 2010, 9:04 pm

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I agree with Yumehaka :3~ Don't worry about improving so much, it will happen eventually! Just keep posting and make us happy!! LOL j/k xD This is also one of my top favorites! *u* My mood improves each time I see an update! hehehe

posted by Heldrad on June 3rd, 2010, 9:27 pm

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Overnight? He and Haru will be alone together overnight? While Haru is very drunk?

posted by KirtiMiko on June 3rd, 2010, 9:28 pm

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Awwww~~~~ I swear this comic is one of my only sources of fangirling. :D
Everybody's having a weird art slump right now I think. Or at least, a lot of people lately. I know how you feel; lotsa stuff but you don't know how to get to it.
Well, you're better then me, I just like, art died. XD;;

posted by FanFantasy on June 3rd, 2010, 11:13 pm

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Okay, this just keeps getting better and better :D

posted by aishite imasu. on June 4th, 2010, 12:22 am

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posted by three-legged-cow on June 4th, 2010, 12:47 am

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OMG! Haru looks sooo adorable, like a child almost! I wanna hug him. >w<

posted by Chaillot on June 4th, 2010, 3:46 am

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I see your art become better, the canges are notrious :D Your efforts are being recompenseds.

I like Haru in the last panel hahaha it's so funny sitting like that xD He want cake, give him cake for goddness shake!!! It's so damn cute, he diserve!

posted by Megu (Guest) on June 4th, 2010, 4:26 am

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this story always has me guessing, that's for sure! On the last page, I had this image of Shiratori having to take Haru to Haru's home where, of course, Haru's epic mom would be-I pictured her being all 'YOU'RE the one my little Haru keeps talking about, my you ARE handsome *more awkward statements*"
Then of course, the inevitable of Haru getting in trouble for his stupidity xD

ohhh, I wonder how Shiratori is going to act around Haru now ohh *way too excited*

Also, you shouldn't be too hard on yourself when it comes to this comic! You should be drawing because you enjoy it and because you want to learn/improve, although I do commend you for powering through! I'm a studio art major in University, and let me tell you, when I get stuck, I REALLY get stuck. So all the power to you, and you have the support of your many fans!

Also, you have a unique style, quite different from a traditional manga, which I think MAKES the comic feel more dynamic- it's fresh! You don't need a lot of little unnecessary details on many of the pages, even if you're considering publishing-which leads me to another point- if you decide to print copies of Forced Seduction- (I'm assuming) you'll have the story finished, making it easier to go back through your work and edit!

posted by lovecrumb on June 4th, 2010, 4:58 am

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Aww!! Haru is so cute when he yawns =) Heartwarming <3 <3

posted by poisenivy on June 4th, 2010, 9:28 am

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confession time+Alone time=FUNTIME

posted by irys_rocker_thornz on June 4th, 2010, 10:09 pm

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SLEEPOVER!!!!! yaayyyyyy haha yes!

posted by Guest on June 18th, 2010, 6:53 pm

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I'm so excited to see what comes next!!! >.<

posted by kukuru2 on June 18th, 2010, 11:24 pm

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haru is soo cute drunk

posted by JeweldDagger on January 16th, 2011, 4:23 pm

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