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miyuli, September 16th, 2009, 12:30 pm ( Reply )

- Yey, I drew a page in school today x3
I bet people were giving me a strange look XD ('cuz I actually drew it in the school cafeteria)

I love drawing Haru like this (idiotic that is) because I know how the story ends (presumably).
Then again, it's so wrong to draw Shiratori this girly XD

However, I feel kinda insecure about the language, so please correct me if I'm wrong, k?

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I betcha Shiratori's going to kick some hired-mean-guys rump. Or he could run for it. xD

...Haru kind of freaks me out in that last panel. o_o But I'm guessing that's what he's meant to do, so it's fine. xD

posted by KudaKitsune on September 16th, 2009, 1:24 pm

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Wow, Haru. Do you steal all of your moves from bad porn?

And since you would like corrections, the "knight" phrase is typically called a "knight in shining armor", though in context, "shiny knight" works just as well. Lol.
And in the last panel, by "saver of life", you probably meant "lifesaver", which is a more common word (though 'saver of life' is grammatically sound). Like, "Wow, you're a real lifesaver!"
I'll also say that the phrase, "it has" or "it is" is rarely used in conversational English, unless you're going for emphasis. It's almost always contracted into "it's". An example of not using the contraction would be... "It -will- work," rather than, "It'll work", or, "That's my cat. Don't look at me like that...That -is- my cat, I swear!"
What can I say? English speakers are lazy people. If in doubt, contract it. XD

posted by coolchan on September 16th, 2009, 1:47 pm

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Yeeah Shiratori's gonna kick their asses...

posted by BaldDumboRat on September 16th, 2009, 1:50 pm

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Great Comic! lol this "plan" is soooo going to backfire! I'm sure it did work on all the girls, Haru, but that's the difference this time, isn't it? lol great job. I think the art is absolutly amazing, really. i'm envious of your talent. ha, and on the subject of english contractions- I have actually seen I'll've for "I will have" as in "I will have finished by time you get there, don't bother coming." I'm not sure it's gramericaly legal, but why not, right? I can't wait to see what hapens next!

posted by Iconic on September 16th, 2009, 3:24 pm

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Oh my Lord. This is SOOO funny. xD Shiratori prolly has some black belt ninja moves. He looks like the type. Last panel FTWx156548458. OMG, funniest face EVER. XDD

posted by n o s e c k s (Guest) on September 16th, 2009, 3:40 pm

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cute!! hahaha i love this so damn much its so funny!!! and ur really good too ^^ love it!

posted by hitsugaya15 on September 16th, 2009, 3:56 pm

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Ditto Kuda! They're toast.Chibi Haru is continuing to own me. That is all.

posted by sunlily on September 16th, 2009, 4:13 pm

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hahah what a smooth operattooorrr~

posted by hiruda on September 16th, 2009, 4:38 pm

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cute and naive : D

posted by DoubleStroke on September 16th, 2009, 5:33 pm

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Wow I kinda feel like slaping him/ laughing moment XD

posted by KyattoWing on September 16th, 2009, 5:35 pm

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its gonna backfire ... i know it xD

posted by pika-chan on September 16th, 2009, 7:56 pm

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posted by deuxmind on September 16th, 2009, 10:13 pm

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haha oh gosh this is so funny!!!

posted by Rennim on September 16th, 2009, 11:08 pm

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Lol, Haru totally pwns xD
His face at the last panel reminded me of invader Zim's, so much win~
Your comic is love. <3

posted by rin-tan on September 17th, 2009, 5:18 am

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Let me guess, our favorite glasses boy is like a black belt or something? XD

posted by Faery Goddyss on October 11th, 2009, 2:04 am

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Because he's totally going to rough up your bully-boys. xD And then they'll come after /you/.

posted by Nations on November 11th, 2009, 10:22 am

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hes such an ass >.< paying ppl to bully a random girl so he can get with her >:O

oh well XDD hes still such a cutie >w<

posted by Draconickitty on June 6th, 2010, 8:03 am

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the last panel is priceless. ; w ;
but... in movies,Haru-chan those plans really never ever work xD

posted by Ai Ataru on June 15th, 2010, 7:58 pm

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lmao XD

posted by whispr on June 28th, 2010, 2:02 am

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posted by erieri on July 20th, 2010, 6:00 am

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why does the last panel remind me of sumthin from naruto?

posted by Goth_Punk_Kura42 on August 5th, 2010, 4:35 am

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yea every GIRL has fallen in love w/ you that(obviously im talking to the character who has to do the 1 month bet thing)

posted by michaelj316 on August 13th, 2010, 10:01 am

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I bet Shiratori will kick those punks asses!

posted by Lanavis on August 25th, 2010, 11:16 pm

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silly boy, stop thinking of shiratori as a girl and you might stand a chance.

posted by RogueDeceit on October 7th, 2010, 2:05 am

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BWAHAHA that picture with Shira is GREAT!!

posted by Botan on January 9th, 2011, 3:40 pm

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That evil mastermind expression he has in the last panel is fabulous

posted by ChuMeo on April 5th, 2015, 7:27 pm

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